The Faceless Man Book Review

Title – The Faceless Man
Author – Isaac Oosterloo
Publisher – Aurora House Publishing

Whether it’s leaning hard into a sharp corner in the east coast hinterland rain forest, or the endless lonely desert miles across the top end, Isaac Oosterloo puts the reader in the saddle as you join him and his best mate, Monkey on an epic journey through some of the most beautiful and harsh landscapes Australia has to offer.

Cold, wet and wild nights spent weathering coastal storms or the peace and quiet of an outback sunrise are perfectly captured with an easy yet evocative language and gives a real insight into what we can all expect if we can just let go of whatever holds us in place and embrace the freedom of being in control of our own destiny.

An honest account of the people met along the way with some typically open, warm and helpful Australian townsfolk and just as typically less than warm and helpful Australian townsfolk are mixed with random meetings with international and domestic travellers to gather an interesting and eclectic cast.

Not just a travel story, it also conveys the relationship between two mates relying on each other to successfully rise to each challenge which comes their way. One a mechanical genius able to keep the bikes running with minimal tools but vast knowledge, the other a creative and social man able to bring strangers into their world and immediately make them friends.

It is impossible to read this book without peering out the window at your own suburban jungle without your mind wandering to those long black roads and dusty red plains, with equal amounts of wistfulness and envy of The Faceless Man.

Warwick O’Neill
Everton Park
Queensland

Talon, Encounter

 

Chapter 27 excerpt

Talon turned once more and flew directly at Pete and Zed, without Matica telling him where to fly or what to do. It was all Talon’s doing. He was the one mocking the poachers and teasing them. He had a lot of fun doing that. Matica was a bit hesitant – what if they shoot at them? – but did the most of it, even though her heart raced and wanted to escape her chest. She only hoped that Pete and Zed were stunned enough not to shoot at them and kill them both.
Talon flew at Pete and Zed and Matica, putting all her courage together, yelled down at them as they approached. Looking at Pete she yelled, ‘Hey, you down there, Pete. How are you? Surprised? Can’t believe that I’m flying on my condor?’ When Talon turned once more and they flew over the poachers again, Matica shouted at them, ‘BECAUSE HE IS MINE! HE IS NOT YOURS TO DO WHAT YOU WISH WITH HIM. And that would be shooting him down. No way!’
Even though Matica was brave and said these words, the truth was, her heart was racing even faster. She was so afraid and shaking all over, trying to steady her voice, which she believed she achieved. She also tried to restrain her heart and her hands, holding on at Talon’s neck, but hadn’t much success with that. But she wasn’t finished with them yet, what she wanted to tell them. She had to set their heads right that Talon does not belong to them, that Talon belongs to her. Talon sensed it, so he turned once more and flew towards the
poachers in the hope they wouldn’t come to their senses yet and would indeed shoot at them.
Pete and Zed followed them with their eyes, but didn’t raise their guns to shoot at them. They were still too dazed to see Matica on the condor’s back, flying with him and even talking to them.
Talon and Matica were in high spirits now, watching them like a hawk, watching their movements, to see if one of them would raise their gun and shoot at them.
Matica had her eyes closed to calm herself and to think what she could tell them, but as soon as they were close to the poachers again, Matica opened her eyes and yelled once more, ‘You see, I raised him, as you must know since you took his egg from the nest on the mountain.
So believe me, he is mine.’ And then she stated, ‘And the scar on your head? Well, that’s what you get when you want to have property that doesn’t belong to you.’ She grinned brightly as Talon stretched out his talons to frighten them, flying directly over Pete and Zed, screeching and laughing. They dropped to the ground, screaming in horror and dismay, covering their heads with their hands.
‘Good on you, Talon. They are too afraid to shoot at us now. Well done.’
Becoming bolder as she slowed down her breathing. Matica laughed out loud but saw her opportunity as Talon flew around them. She yelled out again, ‘Hey you, you can’t shoot my condor down, you know. It’s illegal. You hear me? IT’S ILLEGAL. Anyway, they’re my condors, not yours. They belong to me and to the village people here. You have no right to do what you are longing and planning to do with my condors.
Go home or something really bad will happen, before my condor hurts you once more, ugly one. And never come back.’ She laughed uncontrollably, nearly sliding off of Talon. Just then Tamo and Tima joined them at either side, laughing with Matica and Talon.
The poachers sat up, still stunned, following Talon and Matica with their eyes. ‘You cannot do that,’ the ugly one yelled out, lifting his free fist up.

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Chapter 33 excerpt

No one, not the villagers, or even Matica and Talon, heard or saw them coming. They came, silent as night, soundless and without flapping their wings, Tamo and Tima just appeared and landed right in front of the poachers, wings stretched wide, staring them down,

The poachers tried to run but the grass was slippy and they fell, sliding toward the condors, all the way screaming.
The condors awaited them, grunting at them and smiled.
Finally they came to a halt, just in front of Tamo’s and Tima’s talons. Pete and Zed stared horrified at them, not knowing if they would kill them. They lifted their arms to protect their heads and faces.
Tamo and Tima looked at them, not smiling anymore, not grunting anymore. They just stared down at them. Tima with red burning eyes, and Tamo with grey burning eyes. Next Tamo, very quietly and slowly, lowered his head and pecked Pete in his stomach with his open beak. He screamed out and tried to slap his beak and head away with his hand. But Tamo bent away, grunting angrily. Tima did the same with Zed, and he also wanted to slap her head. It didn’t work. Then both poachers tried to escape from the condors by crawling backwards on their hands and feet, kicking their feet at Tamo and Tima, quietly whining. But Tamo and Tima didn’t let themselves get irritated by these actions and followed them, staring at them with burning eyes and elongated necks.
The crowd was so still and wondered and watched what the condors would do to the poachers or if they could quickly capture them. You could hear the wind in the leaves of the nearby bushes, it was so quiet.
Matica couldn’t see what was happening as she was behind the crowd, but she saw Tamo and Tima landing by the poachers. She grinned mischievously, knowing what they could do to them. She ran now through the crowd with Talon following behind until she stood in front and just saw how Pete in desperation kicked at Tamo.

Suddenly, Pete stood up so fast and ran that not even Tamo had time to hold him back. Zed followed him. Tamo and Tima looked after them, screeched and ran to get airborne to follow them.

‘Way to go!’ Matica yelled at them, holding Talon back as he wanted to go after them. ‘Talon, let them have their fun.’ Talon nodded.
The villagers cheered and clapped their hands.
Pajaro motioned his people to charge after them.
Tamo and Tima circled quietly over the charging villagers and escaping poachers. Flying low, they dive-bombed at the poachers again. The villagers cheered at them. Tamo flew so low after the ugly poacher that he rammed him on his shoulder with his claws but leaving no marks on the man. But Pete fell to the ground, screaming and believing that Tamo had hurt him again. However, after feeling his shoulder where Tamo’s claw had scraped him and noticing that his overalls weren’t torn, or blood on his fingers, he just shook his fist and swore loudly. Tamo flew off, laughing.
Then Talon, watching and learning and thinking that this is fun, took off and followed his parents. Matica couldn’t hold him back. Flying over the poachers, he rammed Zed the same way his father did with Pete but not hurting him either. Zed fell to the ground not far from Pete with an ugly look on his face, feeling at his shoulder. Same as with Pete’s, his overalls weren’t torn and no blood seeped through the material. Not even their long hair was messed up from the strong wind their wings had created flying so low over them. It was glued to their scalp from the poo of the condors.
Not expecting what the condors did, they sat on the ground for a while longer to recover from the shock that they were nearly scratched and wounded by the condors again. But not to be a big target for the condors, they bent down their heads between their knees and folded their hands over their heads to protect them just in case the condors’ came back and really hurt them this time. They waited for a while longer.
Tamo and Tima weren’t far away. They watched the poachers. They would assist the villagers in any way if they plan to capture them…

 

 

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Flames of Rebellion

Review by Caitriona Nienaber

I really enjoyed reviewing your manuscript Flames of Rebellion. Apart from learning quite a lot I found it to be quite gripping.

The manuscript flowed really well. Your dialogue (in keeping with the era) was first-class and really fleshed out your characters. You created such endearing and believable characters amongst the miners and really portrayed their daily life convincingly. Even though the subject matter was at times confronting and gritty,your use of humour was ever-present and gave a sense of balance.

Most of the changes I made were to do with capitalisation and use of hyphens as well as keeping consistency throughout the text.

I loved the epilogue with Patrick speaking at Fergus’ graveside. This is a really great technique for educating the reader about subsequent events in a novel way, as well as being very touching.

I hope you are happy with the changes.

Sincerely,

Caitriona Nienaber

Read excerpts

Wheels of Mizfortunate

A Rude Awakening

As I opened my eyes I was dazed. Somehow I knew this was a hospital room and I was lying on a narrow hospital bed, unable to move. When I saw the nurse enter my room patting her hair and looking around, I remembered why she was curious; it was in my long-term memory. I guessed she was primping in case I had visitors. She knew I was a cosmetologist as many of my visitors were friends from that corner of my world. In a hazy, shadowy way, I remembered her as she was coming in and going out of my room. Until today everything had seemed to shift in and out of focus.

Today I saw her clearly. “How are you today, Linda?” she asked. When she finally looked at me, I flipped her off with my middle finger, on the only hand I could move. I was angry. She doesn’t care how I feel, I thought. She’s busy primping her hair. She won’t even bother to look at me for an answer to her pretentious inquiry. She ignored my rebellious gesture and kept walking toward me with the food tray, which had a big hypodermic needle filled with pureed food on it. Because of the tracheotomy in my throat I could not eat and swallow food; I was fed by a tube that led directly into my stomach. Feeling frantic, I plugged the hole on my tracheotomy tube with my index finger and tried to talk. Oxygen was pumped into my lungs through the tube in my throat so I couldn’t breathe when the hole was plugged. As I tried to talk, gasping I said, “Please, don’t feed me, I am still full. My stomach hurts.” I croaked as clearly as I could. That did not slow her down. She kept walking closer to me. I frantically pointed my finger at my communication board, to the tile that said ‘No food’. She wasn’t paying attention to me. She was going to hurt me again. What could I do to make her stop? Why won’t she look at me?

I’m awake! Which one of us here is incoherent?! She saw that I was agitated, and as I touched my throat she lunged at me. I quickly yanked out my tracheotomy tube. I must have passed out. I was later told I had pulled out my tracheotomy tube before, and tried to yank out the tube in my stomach also, probably for the same reason. The staff always justified my struggles with them by saying, “She is going through an angry stage.” I had been going in and out of a coma for several weeks but it felt like forever at the time! I remember the food assault happening frequently and what they did to me. If they had bothered to read my chart they would have seen in 1978 I had surgery that divided my stomach and altered my intestinal track. As a result, I could only eat small amounts of food, and only when I was actually hungry. I weighed ninety-seven pounds at the time of my accident, so I obviously did not over-eat. Seeing the nurse approach me with that hypodermic needle filled with pureed food on the tray meant more torture for me. I had to take desperate measures to stop them; I was supposed to be the ‘sick one’!

When I next opened my eyes I was confused. I did not know where I was, or what to expect. My throat hurt dreadfully. Everything hurt so much! At least this time when I was conscious again my hand was not tied to my body or to the bed – as had happened before. They would repeatedly tie my hand to the bed when I tried to communicate something to them. My left hand and arm was the only thing that I could move or use and they would ignore me or deprive me of that! I am truly amazed I managed to survive my medical care. I was only trying to talk to them. They kept hurting me. Why weren’t they nice to me?


Who Am I?

As I lay alone in my room my mind was numb. I seemed to be going in and out of consciousness again. I had no idea what had happened to me or why I was there. I was confused and frightened when anyone visited me, although I was happy when I remembered some people in the group of strangers. I was very confused when they told me that these three boys who visited me were mine. I thought they were too big to be my sons. After some convincing, I was told that the last two or three years prior to my accident had been wiped out. My boys felt bad that I didn’t know them. It was especially confusing because I remembered some people who were strangers to them. My boys had been with me throughout my recovery and the conditions of my memory just added to the confusion for all of us. My youngest sister Joyce married a guy that I knew in high school and gave birth to her daughter Sarah on Valentine’s Day in 1985. I didn’t know what to expect about ‘my life’ so when she walked into my room at the nursing home so that I could see her, I asked Joyce if she was my baby. Joyce just laughed and wryly said, “You have always wanted a daughter, but this one is mine.” By the middle of March 1985, I was conscious more than not and managed to convince my family and some visitors that I was awake. My family went through an erratic range of emotions as they realized I was awake and in some cases I don’t know if it was fear or delight! ~smile & wink~

I was sent back to Ramsey Hospital to be diagnosed so they would know what to do with me. The hospital performed tests on every level to determine if I was truly coherent. They removed my tracheotomy, along with all the needles, tubes and other medical paraphernalia. I could croak answers to things pertaining to different areas of my body, but aside from that I did not know much. I was confused, uncomfortable and as frightened about life as one would expect. But fortunately I also had a survival mentality I was not aware of at the time and that gave me enough confidence to overcome many of the would-be obstacles! They removed the feeding tube in my stomach so I had to re-learn how to eat. I had no strength or coordination in my body. The only movement I had for almost five months was limited to movement of my left hand and arm.

At the time I did not have much going for me. Therapists from the Saint Paul Rehabilitation Center, SPRC, began working with me in March when they knew that I was going home. SPRC saw me as no one else did. They did not see how much I had lost, they saw my unlimited potential. I thought they were crazy. I was confused by the things they would ask me to do, and I was just as confused at my ability or inability to do them. I was a mystery alright, and I think God was the only one who was not surprised! Many of the doctors at Ramsey Hospital were amazed that I survived in the first place, now I had recovered enough to go home! They knew first-hand how seriously ill I had been. I may have survived physically but my psyche; awareness and my sense of self were dead and gone.

Welcome back to the world lady… I was an empty/injured head on a broken body! I was sent back to the nursing home for therapy to do some basic physical things. I learned to sit up, but did not have the strength required for sitting up for any length of time. Even fifteen minutes was too long – I was like a jellyfish and had no muscle control anywhere on my body. I slowly slouched down as I sat in my wheel chair, or any chair I was put in. I had to learn to ‘transfer’, even though I had no idea what a transfer was yet. A transfer is the ability to go from my bed to my wheelchair, from my wheelchair to another chair, the car, the commode, or the toilet, etc. I was not able to help much when I tried to transfer. I was like a baby; literally a vegetable in every way. I was told what to do and how to do it. I had to learn how to breathe, eat, and how to breathe when I ate. I re-learned a little basic hygiene such as washing my face and how to brush my teeth, although I had fewer teeth to brush. Three of my front teeth were broken in half when I hit the steering wheel. The impact also caused several of my molars to split in half and eventually fall out. My mouth was like a battlefield, I never knew which tooth would fall next! ~toothless smile~

Speaking was a problem, as my voice is Dysarthric because the tracheotomy tube was left in my body too long. I began to re-learn to talk, which was an unexpected challenge. Trying to articulate, as I learned to breathe while I was talking was a big challenge. That was tough – breathe and talk at the same time? I took a breath for each syllable in each word. My verbal talking was choppier than this written explanation. ~smile~ I now know, thirty years later, there were a few people who regretted my re-learning to talk. Dad used to tease me and when I discovered I could tease right back it was all over for him. When he started calling me ‘nightmare’, I said, “I’m just getting started Dad!” My sarcasm was apparently another natural instinct. I obviously inherited it from dad, and I quickly re-learned to play off it.

I sure miss him. Every now and then when I do something really stupid (not too rare) I look up at Heaven and say, “That dumb move was for your entertainment Dad!” ~smile & wink~

Flames of Rebellion excerpts

Chapter 1 On the Bullock Track

Around mid-morning the next day Tom led the team through a heavily timbered section of the track. Patrick was walking alongside the dray absentmindedly filling his pipe with tobacco. He was concentrating on pushing the leaves in with just the right pressure, so he didn’t immediately  notice when Tom started pulling the team to a halt. When he looked up, he saw four men file out onto the track in front of them. All four had handkerchiefs over their faces and a pistol each. One of the men rode forward slightly ahead of the others and stopped. He wore a bright green sash around his waist, a woven straw hat and matching green ribbon tied around it. Patrick thought the get-up made him look a bit effeminate, but something about the way he held himself suggested he wasn’t a man to be taken lightly.

“That’s far enough for now,” the leader of the outfit said. “You’ve probably guessed by now, we ain’t the welcomin’ committee. If you’d be so kind as to keep your ‘ands where I can see ‘em, me and the lads will just ‘elp ourselves to anything you ‘ave of value and you can be on your way.”
“We’ve got nothing of value, ya fool.” Tom said as he placed the end of the long whip handle on the ground, rested the top against his shoulder and raised his hands. “We don’t get paid until after we deliver the load.”
He glanced back at Patrick and something in his eyes told Patrick that the removal of their valuables might not yet be a foregone conclusion.
“Aye, but what sort of a man gets around without a nice watch buried
in his coat pocket in this day and age?” the bushranger snarled.
“I’ve just left Her Majesty’s care after fourteen years,” Patrick exaggerated.
“I’ve got naught but the clothes on my back, Sir.” He had noticed the machete on the front of the dray. It was out of arm’s reach at the moment, but if need be he could take a couple of steps and have hold of it before anyone knew what had happened.
“Well either way, my lads will be havin’ a look through your pockets.”

The other three men dismounted and started towards the dray, tucking their pistols into their sashes, while their leader kept a pistol pointed at Tom. One man held the harness of the lead bullock, while the other two made their way towards the Tom and Patrick.

Suddenly, Tom grabbed the whip handle and flicked it rapidly towards the highwayman still on his horse. The tip of the whip missed, but the unexpected loud crack startled the horse, causing it to jump sideways, unbalancing its rider momentarily. In order to steady his horse, he tightened his grip on the reins, dropping the pistol to the ground.

The cracking whip was also a signal to the bullocks. They started forward, taking the man holding the harnesses by surprise. Tom took advantage of the confusion, speedily bringing up the butt of the big stockwhip into the groin of the man who was about to start looking through his pockets. The man instantly dropped to his knees, putting him at just the right height for Tom to drive a knee into his face.
Patrick reacted to Tom’s attack by lunging for the machete, and swung it at the man in front of him. At the last moment, he turned his wrist and stuck the flat of the blade against his opponent’s head, knocking him to the ground. He watched the man fall to make sure he was out. When he looked up he saw that Tom had rushed the leader and was dragging him off the horse. Patrick then ran at the man who had taken the harness of the bullocks, who was now trying to regain his balance after the team’s sudden movement. Patrick dropped his shoulder, charged and knocked the man to the ground, holding him there with his foot at the man’s throat.

By this time, Tom had unhorsed the leader of the gang and was pointing a pistol at his head. It was all over as quickly as it had begun.

Five minutes later, Tom had steadied his bullock team and the four would-be bushrangers were tied together on the side of the track, their horses tethered to the back of the dray.

Tom leaned over the four of them, and dipped his hat.
“Thank you gentlemen, we’ll be on our way now,” he said. “There’s a knife over by that tree you can use to cut yourself free, and then you can be on your way. I’d advise you to make yourself scarce around these parts. The good people around here don’t take kindly to your sort. Good day to you.”

Later around the campfire, Patrick sat thinking over the day’s events.

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Chapter 6 Women!

The bloody Redcoats are coming!”
The news was astonishing. All over the diggings, the miners waved copies of The Argus with those who could read explaining the details to those who couldn’t. It appeared that in response to the meeting of diggers at Forrest Creek earlier this month, Governor La Trobe had decided to send soldiers, in addition to the current police presence, to maintain law and order on the diggings. The report stated that due to numerous police officers deserting their posts to join the miners, not enough police were available to maintain order. The soldiers were being brought in because they could not desert, as that would bring the death penalty. Regardless, it was a harsh response to what had been a peaceful, if fiery, meeting of diggers.
It had started with a report contained in The Argus.
Argus 12 December 1851
FELLOW DIGGERS!
 
The intelligence has just arrived of the resolution of the Government to double the license fee. Will you tamely submit to the imposition, 0r assert your rights like men? You are called upon to pay a tax, originated and concocted by the most heartless selfishness. A tax imposed by your Legislators for the purpose of detaining you in their workshops, in their stable yards, and by their flocks and herds. They have conferred to effect this; they would increase this seven-fold, but they are afraid! Fie upon such pusillanimity and shame upon the men, who, to save a few paltry pounds for their own pockets, would tax the labour of the poor man’s hands.

A meeting had been called and on 15 December, Patrick found himself heading to Forrest Creek with Fergus and a large number of other men from the Ballarat diggings. By four o’clock that afternoon fifteen thousand miners had congregated, complete with a brass band to add to the spectacle.
Many speakers took to the podium, and although Patrick was far from the front of the crowd, the passion of the speakers caused their voices to rise with the energy of the crowd so that their stirring speeches could be heard by all. Calls of ‘Brotherhood!’ brought loud cheers from bearded throats with fists waving in the air.

One speaker advised that The Herald, a long-time supporter of the squattocracy, had labelled the diggers as ‘cut-throats and scoundrels’ and Patrick raised his voice and fists with everyone else to jeer and boo the publication.

When the speaker yelled, “Now will you pay the three pound licence…?” Patrick joined in the chorus of “Never!”
A Mr Lineham took the stage and told the assembly that when asked to pay the fee he would simply refuse, and if all refused, they could hardly all be imprisoned. This brought cheers of support. He continued by stating that he never advocated force, and the assembled masses could win without needing to resort to conflict. When he asked the crowd if they would pay, Patrick, caught up in the emotion and passion of his fellows cried out “No!”
Beside him he could see Fergus, staring with intensity at the speakers.
There was a fire in those eyes, the like of which Patrick had never seen before. With every cheer and roar of support, Patrick could well imagine his friend, kilted and with a sword in hand defending his highland home alongside his ancestors long dead from English invaders.

He turned his attention back to the speaker as the meeting reached its crescendo. The final speaker, a former squatter and passionate
republican, Captain Harrison, reinforced everything the other speakers had said. Refusal to pay the fee, standing as brothers on this issue and not resorting to violence, these were the things they all held dear.

The meeting concluded with a resolution that, ‘The meeting deprecates as unjust, illegal and impolitic, the attempt to increase the licence fee from thirty shillings to three pounds’. Each digger agreed to pay a shilling a month to Captain Harrison who had volunteered to represent the diggers in Melbourne, a kind of fighting fund. And with that, fifteen thousand excited miners, Patrick and Fergus amongst them, gave three cheers and dispersed back to their homes.

 

Flames of Rebellion BOOK LAUNCH!

 

Flames of Rebellion by new Australian author Warwick O’Neill will be officially launched at

REaD Cafe, Paradise Resort, Gold Coast, Qld on

Saturday 9th April at

6.30pm

ALL ARE WELCOME

Meet and talk with the author. Find out how he researched his book. 

 

On his release from gaol, all Patrick Flanagan wanted was a good woman, a family and a peaceful life. Then he heard the call that reverberated around the world. Gold!

Leaving Moreton Bay behind, he jumps aboard The Cumberland to work for his passage to the goldfields. On the voyage he befriends Fergus, an old sailor at the crossroads of new technology. Together the pair jump ship in Melbourne and head towards the Ballarat Goldfields to make their fortune.
But, their dreams of easy riches are soon shattered as they not only battle the elements and the elusive nature of the gold, but also corrupt administrators and brutal law enforcement officers of the Colony, including an old acquaintance of Patrick’s.

As the group struggle to make a living from the unforgiving earth, events move inexorably towards a fateful collision between the authorities and goldminers, testing the loyalties of the group and finding Patrick on the frontline facing Government forces as they emerge from the early morning mist.

 

REVIEW:
I really enjoyed reviewing your book Flames of Rebellion. Apart from learning quite a lot I found it to be quite gripping.

The story flowed well. Your dialogue (in keeping with the era) was first-class and really fleshed out your characters. You created such endearing and believable characters amongst the miners and really portrayed their daily life convincingly. Even though the subject matter was at times confronting and gritty, your use of humour was ever-present and gave a sense of balance.

I loved the epilogue with Patrick speaking at Fergus’ graveside. This is a really great technique for educating the reader about subsequent events in a novel way, as well as being very touching.

Caitriona Nienaber